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Pasión en la arena

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Pasión en la arena

Notapor Laura Gimenez » Dom Nov 05, 2017 04:35


Te diviso descendiendo por la playa

cubierta de noche y de estrellas.

Con prisa incontenible me descalzo

hundiendo mis pies bajo la arena

que corren a tus brazos presurosos

en ceñir a mi cuerpo que flaquea.

Porque el solo roce de tus manos

me envuelve en emociones que navegan

en el fondo de tu boca y tu mirada,

y en tu vientre vigoroso, que se quema

al solo contacto de mis besos

con una vivacidad que desespera.

Y la noche se cierra ante el asombro

de vernos en el medio de una escena

donde roja se vuelve hasta la luna,

y titilan nerviosas las estrellas.

Mientras el aire se perfuma en amores

la rompiente desagravia su condena

asediando al contacto de las olas

que estrechándolas con furia, las penetra.

Contagiado en la pasión exuberante

que ponemos vos y yo sobre la arena.
Gracias de antemano a todos los que deseen hacerme críticas constructivas, son las que mas aprecio.
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Re: Pasión en la arena

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Re: Pasión en la arena

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Re: Pasión en la arena

Notapor Laura Gimenez » Vie Ene 12, 2018 11:28

Gracias de antemano a todos los que deseen hacerme críticas constructivas, son las que mas aprecio.
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Re: Pasión en la arena

Notapor ALI AL HADED » Sab Ene 27, 2018 05:03

Estimada Laura:

¡tú sabes de que va!

Hermoso y sensual tu poema. GUAUUUUUUUU

Saludos cordiales
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